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Naruto 7 min. In Heaven pt 1 by ~Mihashi-Harumi-chan:iconMihashi-Harumi-chan:



It was Naruto’s birthday and he invited almost every ninja he knew; even Harumi and Hitomi. He send them a letter which said that they would meet in the woods.
“What do you want, Naruto?” Hitomi asked annoyed. “Well the day after tomorrow is my birthday and I wanted to ask you guys to come…” he said
“But we’re with the Akatsuki… so why would you ask us?” Harumi asked the blonde ninja.
“Well… we’re still friends right?”
“True but still… if you ask us…. You know we won’t be the only ones who will come, ne?”
“You mean-”
“Yeah, Itachi, Kisame, Sasori and Deidara.” Naruto sighted when Harumi said these names. “I don’t know if the others will like that….” He said. “Well that has nothing to do with us! You should decide for yourself. But what I do know is that if we ask them nicely… they won’t fight you guys.” Hitomi smiled at Naruto. “Listen…” Harumi started. “It’s your party. So we won’t decide who you invite… but if you want us… you’ll have to get over it ‘cause they’re coming with us!” Right after she said that, the two disappeared in a whirlwind of Sakura leaves.

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The next day Naruto decided that he needed to talk to the other ninjas. “Listen Naruto…” Sakura started. “It’s your party… shikashi… the Akatsuki? Harumi and Hitomi are friends but they’ll take Itachi and the others with them. Then we’re all dead!”
“Demo they promised they would take care of that fact. They said Itachi and the rest wouldn’t fight us! They promised! Like they promised to stay friends; even though we’re on opposite sides.” Everyone sighted.
“W-well… if it means so much to you…”
“Yosh! Then I’ll ask them to come!” Naruto shouted. Sasuke sighted and left the room. How could he possibly invite his brother?! The good points about it:
- Harumi would come (Sasuke had a little crush on the youngest Mihashi-twin)
- Maybe, if Sakura and Ino took the lead on the party, they would play that stupid game they talk about. Seven minutes in heaven. He did have a chance she would pick him…
- Also he would be closer to her… closer then ever (if she would pick him of course)
- And maybe he could kill Itachi after the party!

De bad points about the idea…:

- Itachi would come too… and that was something he didn’t want to happen.
- A few other members of the Akatsuki would come
-          Also if they would play that game... what if someone else picked him. Someone like Ino or Sakura! That would be awful!
- And one of the worse things (on the second place right after Itachi) Mihashi Hitomi would come too. She hated Sasuke after he tried to kiss her sister once, without Harumi’s permission. Man she was pissed and she would probably still be angry.

Sasuke walked through Konoha, thinking about the problem. “Kuso… I can’t do anything… maybe I’ll get a chance to kill Itachi and get Harumi to be mine….” He thought.

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[The day of the party]
The doorbell rang and Naruto walked to the door. “Konbanwa Naruto. Also happy birthday!” Sakura said happy. She and Ino walked inside the house. “Yo dope…” Sasuke said. The two girls turned around and sighted with a huge grin on their face. “Sasuke-kun!!!!!” they shouted. Sasuke sighted and moved into the house, followed by the two girls. “Happy birthday!” Tenten and Lee said when Naruto almost closed the door. Neji was standing next to them without saying anything. Then the three walked inside. “H-h-happy…. B-birthday, N-Naruto-kun…” Someone said. It was Hinata. She, Kiba and Shino were standing there. “Yo Naruto! We’re invited right? Happy birthday! Let’s get inside Akamaru!” Kiba said, and he and his dog moved inside the house. “Good to see you, Naruto.” Shino said and he and Hinata moved in too. she was blushing like hell.

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after a few minutes the bell rang again. Naruto opened it and saw the three sand-ninjas. "Oi Gaara! nice to see you guys here!" he said. "Yo Naruto. happy birthday!" Temari and Kankuro said. The three went into the house and the party was getting started. Another 10 minutes past.... a few were dancing, Ino and Sakura were trying to let Sasuke dance with them, but later they only fought with each other. The doorbell rang again. "My god who is it?" Naruto went to the door, opened it and his mouth fell open. "H-H-Haru...mi? H-Hi...tomi? Nani!?" He stepped back. "It's also good to see you, Naruto...." The two Mihashi's said. "Listen we're here like we said, they're not gonna hurt you, as long as you don't hurt us. Deal?"
Harumi smiled when Naruto nodded at her. "Good boy. Let's go inside guys!" Hitomi said.

Naruto had closed the door and moved inside the living room. "Naruto wth is HE doing here?!" Sasuke shouted. "Yeah Naruto! We talked about it, ne? They're gonna kill us!" Sakura and Ino agreed. They did a step closer to Sasuke. "Listen everyone... I'm sorry for the trouble... but Harumi and Hitomi promised that they would take care of the Akatsuki!" Naruto said. Harumi and Hitomi did one step toward the ninjas. "Gomen-nasai for the trouble. But if we're correct then you allowed us to come! So you shouldn't say these things about Naruto."
"You should shut up Hitomi!" Ino shouted.
"Yeah you beat our Sasuke-kun! I'll never forgive you for that!" Sakura yelled.
The two Mihashi's sighted. Sasuke looked at Harumi and tried to get her attention by coughing. "Oh, Sasuke-kun! Is something wrong? I'll take care of you!" Ino and Sakura said and they started to pull Sasuke away from the rest.


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oke next part:
- Ino and Sakura are gonna fight about which game, 7 minutes in heaven or spin the bottle.
- Harumi's dream and nightmare will come true.
- Sasuke's dream will come to an end when the youngest Mihashi-twin will tell him what she thinks of him.
- Hitomi will find out she likes someone she doesn't even know well.
- Naruto's party will be.... fucked up :P ^^
©2007-2009 ~Mihashi-Harumi-chan
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Author's Comments

I'm sorry for those who read teh first first part (that sounded weird I know). I made a new one because the other first part didn't fit:P

so sorry... also the ones that left me a message... I can't answer directly 'cause of a few computer problems.
but I will as soon as I can.


I hope you liked my story.
I will write the next parts later when I have time

tnQ for reading

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Omg!!! Need to know the rest of the story! Very good Maya! loved it!!!

;p :glomp:

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"Everyday I think about you, I keep wishing to get near you to touch you, to hug you... but specially to love you! So, I want to show you hows is my love to you evey time!" ~ Mone
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haha thanks! :hug:
and have fun with the reading

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In politics, if you want anything said ask a man. If you want anything done, ask a woman.
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I heard women will never be as successful as men because they have no wives to advise them.
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I don't play games... I play tricks!
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I will!!

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"Everyday I think about you, I keep wishing to get near you to touch you, to hug you... but specially to love you! So, I want to show you hows is my love to you evey time!" ~ Mone
:iconmihashi-harumi-chan:
okii ^^

--
In politics, if you want anything said ask a man. If you want anything done, ask a woman.
-
I heard women will never be as successful as men because they have no wives to advise them.
-
I don't play games... I play tricks!

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